The Untouchable III

Over all I really like this picture and the corner and red drawn my eyes to her back but I if the ribbon or her hair were moved over just a tad to cover that spot would have me just just seeing the ribbon and then her back. The panties also break the white line/flow of her back. The slight curve of her back is so much better then her standing straight up and reminds one of the wonderful form of females. The play of light and shadows nicely done in making her stand out as well. I still really the picture over all and thank you both for sharing.